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Once a teardrop leaves your eye;
it continues to flow to your neckline
and when it does, it leaves a mark
a path of sadness in your heart.
Water as it cleans your soul
Fire as it melts you down
Ever so clear that the reflections are
your greatest nightmares stabbed behind.
Someone judged you of who you are
Gave his word and bid goodbye
turned his back and took your place
Your friend disappears without a trace.
You apologized but is denied
Unspoken thoughts run across your mind
Unforgiven you stand up high
A silent war has begun.
-Reyes
it continues to flow to your neckline
and when it does, it leaves a mark
a path of sadness in your heart.
Water as it cleans your soul
Fire as it melts you down
Ever so clear that the reflections are
your greatest nightmares stabbed behind.
Someone judged you of who you are
Gave his word and bid goodbye
turned his back and took your place
Your friend disappears without a trace.
You apologized but is denied
Unspoken thoughts run across your mind
Unforgiven you stand up high
A silent war has begun.
-Reyes
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I got angry at one of my friends. Ian. the boy genious. and so I was inspired to make a poem, and I'm happy on how this turned out. dedicated to you...my friend...
questions; <do you mind to answer?>
1. Did the feeling of the author change at the ending part of the poem? How will you conclude?
2. Do you think she made the right choice?
<if you do wanna answer, then post your answers in my front page>
~~~
and yes, fortunately, we're back to being frienzys again. <updated> welcome comments!!!
questions; <do you mind to answer?>
1. Did the feeling of the author change at the ending part of the poem? How will you conclude?
2. Do you think she made the right choice?
<if you do wanna answer, then post your answers in my front page>
~~~
and yes, fortunately, we're back to being frienzys again. <updated> welcome comments!!!
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i love the use of imagery. great poem 